Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Dawn

 

The sun is arriving, flooding the world with light. Dawn has come. A new day is born.

Last night, I dreamt of you. You were laughing so hard at a joke that I told. Your nose was crinkling. Happy tears were forming at the corners of your eyes. I woke up laughing with you.

Today, I find you with me. Your eyes look sleepy. But your smile betrays your drowsiness. The first rays of the sun light your beautiful face. And my heart soars with joy.

It is dawn. And as the sun arrives, you are finally here. With me.

(100 words)
© Isabel M. Casas 20080723

 

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21 comments:

  1. Emmanuel Patrick MJuly 22, 2008 at 9:00 PM

    nice! :D

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  2. Tweety DarioJuly 22, 2008 at 11:44 PM

    aww... para kanino yan, chubbs? :)

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  3. chesca MontinolaJuly 23, 2008 at 12:51 AM

    blown away. am i.

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  4. miki echavezJuly 23, 2008 at 1:23 AM

    wow. ganda! hehe. :] kwento naman jan!!!

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  5. Nhiza AlcalaJuly 23, 2008 at 3:17 AM

    awww..chubbs. ang nice. :)

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  6. Ardee AramJuly 23, 2008 at 4:26 AM

    hay.... in love!!! :P

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  7. a.R NodoraJuly 23, 2008 at 6:14 AM

    uuuy :-)
    "And as the sun arrives, you are finally here. With me."

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  8. maymay ahJuly 23, 2008 at 7:13 AM

    awww..

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  9. Eric ManahanJuly 23, 2008 at 7:28 AM

    un un e...sino ba ung finally here na un? hehehe..peace! =)

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  10. Chubbi ChubbsJuly 23, 2008 at 7:38 AM

    pat, tweety, ches, miki, nhiza, ardee, ar, maymay: thank you! :)
    eric: mahihiritan din kita ulit in the near future. ;)

    I don't know if anyone noticed, but this was inspired by and is the opposite of Dusk: http://chubbs01.multiply.com/journal/item/130/Dusk

    Just thought to write something happy for a change. :)

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  11. dotty ferrerJuly 23, 2008 at 9:22 AM

    ang ganda chubs! huy, punta tayo sa homecoming ha!!!

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  12. maymay ahJuly 23, 2008 at 11:05 AM

    kaya pala feeling ko parang meron ka nang ganitong effect dati..

    hihih, before sunrise at before sunset.. buti na lng ndi 9yrs ang pagitan nito, hehe..

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  13. Celine RJuly 23, 2008 at 12:28 PM

    Hehe pansin ko yun, kaya nagbacktrack ako sa blog mo looking for the "Dusk" post :) Astig nung effect pag binasa sila side-by-side

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  14. Eric ManahanJuly 23, 2008 at 2:29 PM

    hehehe...nde na ko hihirit uli.....peace! =)

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  15. Chubbi ChubbsJuly 23, 2008 at 4:59 PM

    hahha! oo nga, buti nlang, maymay :)

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  16. Chubbi ChubbsJuly 23, 2008 at 4:59 PM

    we wrote something like this before. remember? and i remember ata yung titles. :)

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  17. Chubbi ChubbsJuly 23, 2008 at 5:00 PM

    thanks dotts! are you back home?
    sadly, wala na naman ako sa homecoming! :(

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  18. dotty ferrerJuly 23, 2008 at 7:37 PM

    not yet. be back aug 29 ng gabi. bakit wala ka sa homecoming? oh well, i'll be around naman even after. hehe

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  19. Chubbi ChubbsJuly 23, 2008 at 8:25 PM

    doti :) i'll be on business trip again. :) pero kita kits! :) magpparty na naman tayo sa house niyo pag bday mo! wheee :)

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  20. Augusto HermosillaJanuary 22, 2009 at 9:12 PM

    ganda ng shot mo ah!!!! sa manila bay ito???

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  21. Chubbi ChubbsJanuary 22, 2009 at 9:26 PM

    puerto galera : )

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