The sun is saying goodbye in orange tones. The world is at the brink of darkness. It is dusk. And I am sad.
Last night, I dreamt of you. You were smiling in your charming way. And then laughing at one joke or another. In my sleep, I was laughing with you.
Today, I am alone. I continue to dream of your charming smile. The orange tones light your happy face. And your laughter tickles my heart. I am awake, but still dreaming.
It is dusk. And I am sad. I wonder if I would be if you were here.
(100 words)
© Isabel M. Casas 20080531
Ironically, the piece gave off a positive aura despite the subject. Hmm, it must be the Chubbs factor. :)
ReplyDeleteawww...chubbs, i love it.
ReplyDeletenice. :]
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ReplyDeleteNaks naman! Hehe, nice mare! Take care!
ReplyDeleteis there a chubbs factor? ;)
ReplyDeletehaha sabi ko na you'll like this :)
ReplyDeletethanks miks! :) kwento ko sa yo to next time. :D papagalitan mo na naman ako!
ReplyDeletethanks mare! :) i'll talk to you soon! :)
ReplyDeletenice. =) if you have more like this pabasa ako. =)
ReplyDeletehi kuya! :) 100 words --> http://chubbs01.multiply.com/journal/item/107/Nostalgia
ReplyDeletevery nice!!!!! sa boracay ito???
ReplyDeletemali! sa pagudpud! :P
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